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Jimmy The Teddy Bear

  Once upon a time
I woke up from bed
Brushed my teeth and done my hair
Told my mommy I want a teddy bear
She asked me "how come"
I replied and said "cause it keeps me safe and warm at night"
I begged and begged
"Please!!! Please!!" I cried
she smiled and said alright
I hugged her with joy and
screamed "oh thank you thank you mommy"
As we get in the car
I put my seatbelt on and
We drive away
When we finally reached the store
I looked inside
They're so many teddybears around
I smiled in amazment
"Oh mommy" I yelled"there are so many"
She giggled and said "take your time they're cute"
I smile and walk around
I see small ones and bigs ones talls ones short ones
Hmmm I think to myself "which one should I choose"
I walk around once more
I scream from joy
"Mommy Mommy!!!!" I cried
She looks at me and says "what is it dear"
I scream "I found it I found the teddy bear I want"
She smiles and says "okay what animal is it?"
I tell its a soft white cuddley teddy bear
She smiles and askes me want am I going to name it
I tell my mommy ...
I named the teddy bear Jimmy
She smiled and said what a great name
We payed for Jimmy and drove on home and
I slept with Jimmy that night and
Never let him go cause
He keeps me warm and fuzzy and
He is so adorable and soft and
Very cute looking indeed
That why I love my teddy bear =]

Author notes

I've so many teddybears on my bed =D

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 27, 2008

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    Aw. I loved this poem alot. I love the name Jimmy think i am wierd thats my I-Pods name. I loved the way you described every moment so deeply. Great write i enjoyed reading it. :]]
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    This is very good I like it a lot.
    Thank you for your entry .
    I could not find where you marked which TROPHY you are entering this for.


  • pop123
    March 28, 2008
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    If this isnt a magnificent poem,then my ap name isnt pop123.Great work here,thanks for entering.


  • dust -in-the-wind
    March 22, 2008

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    awww this was really really cute i like this one yeah you aint the only one i have so many teddy bears but i love them all cause they all were given to be by ppl that i care about so i keep them forever lol well good luck in the contest

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