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Soft Spoken


Soft spoken words
of passion;
Hot breath feathers
the longing ear;
Whispers of desire
given freely,
of the heart;
“completely”.






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  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    "Hot breath feathers the longing ear" Great imagery in this line. The whole piece is wonderful Good luck.
    Kelli

  • Acidanthra
    March 22, 2008

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    Oh, i think i need to open the window and let some cool draft in. Great take on the prompt!


  • Kari gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    This was really wonderful. I love it. I like the flow and all of that in this piece. Well done and good luck


  • TizMoi
    March 22, 2008

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    Good luck in the contest Karl, this is so tender and speaks volumes in softness. Great take on the prompt.


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    This is so lovely. I really love how you have written this and the tenderness of this write is amazing. All the best for the contest.

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