One simple breath ~
left on the tip of another's ear
took flight
heading south for all seasons
breaking my silence...
Author notes
Prompt: "Feathering Whispers"
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest- 20 Words Only! by Acidanthra.
525 points, ended March 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The first lines really tie in with your title so well. Rumors do start with "one simple breath-- left on the tip of another's ear" well done.
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Oh this was really nice.. So simple with words, but the impact was great.. Lovely..
Peace to you, Jetleena -
Very good take on the prompt and oh, so true!
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This has such a gentle feel to it! Lovely words you have penned for that prompt!
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oh this is so beautiful it has a soft sensual ring wiht the imagery and feeling in this piece. well done mummy
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I love how you ended this piece with that last line. This was a great take on the prompt and I wish u luck
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This is so tender and beautiful the imagery and the emotional descriptive expression. Great take on the prompt so interesting to read the way people have taken the quote and where it has lead them. Good luck in the contest.
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Very Nice!
Very well written, a lovely piece to read. best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful piece of writing here. Very deep. Well done for this.
Wayne Leon
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