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An afternoon with Jason on the river

The whispering oars
cut through my reverie;
the Argonauts slipped away.
Do we ever stop
searching for that
golden fleece?

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  • Acidanthra
    March 22, 2008
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    Very true! Magnificent penned thoughts poet!


  • Kari gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    I like the historic view point that this piece has. You did well with that oh and btw this is kari aka kari kismet I just changed my name


  • Topaze gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    Very Nice!

    Wonderfully written piece, and a very nice flow. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Wandika gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    No.

    Not ever.

    or that Island.