Tickle

Your whispers of love
tickle my ears. . .
keep talking:
Maybe,
one day,
I'll believe in me,
the way you do.

A contest entry

Prompt Contest- 20 Words Only! by Acidanthra. 525 points, ended March 22, 2008, 11 entries
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Bean Sidhe
May 16, 2008
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Hmmm...short, sweet, tragically honest. Very nice.
Lost Like Woah
March 26, 2008

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laz if you don't get out of my head. many times i have thught the words you wrote. you used few words to bring a powerful thought process to the forefront
Acidanthra
March 22, 2008
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Very gentle, yet leaving a strong message!
Kari
March 22, 2008

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I love the flow and the way it rhymes together. You've done outstanding on that and I wish u the best of luck
Topaze
March 22, 2008
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Well Done!
Very nice piece, and wonderful description. Best of luck in the contest!