Being crushed
you will crumble
standing on a bridge
not built for standing
but to theorize
what is the Other Side
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest- 20 Words Only! by Acidanthra.
525 points, ended March 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is very thought-provoking. great work poet!
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This was a really unique take on the prompt..it made me think
Lol you did good and I wish u the best of luck in the contest 
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Interesting take on the prompt, very creative and superbly penned. Good luck
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Ha,, Good take on the prompt...
Very good title, though long one...
I wish you good luck in the contest...
Love
-Kiddy
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Nice
Very interesting rite and creative. Best of luck in the contest!
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This does prevoke some thought, I can certainly relate to standing on bridges not meant to be stood on as they have falling and fast for myself in the past. Good insight here all the best (Brian).
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very thought provoking this. . .that is difficult to do so well in so few words. keep up the good write!
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