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reminisce

he reminisces the times
they shared
with cupcakes
and jokes

with her favourite
yellow crayon

A contest entry

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  • peridotPixi
    March 22, 2008

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    i like the way this poem is touching, it brings memories back, i like the cupcakes, jokes and her favorite yellow crayon, you packed so much into 15 words good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 22, 2008
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    So sweetly divine... x


  • Topaze
    March 22, 2008
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    Very Nice!

    I enjoyed this piece it had a very nice feel to it. Good luck in the contest.


  • notorious gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Oh, I love cupcakes and jokes! A really happy poem you've written here. It makes me happy. 8) Although a little hungry...fun take on the prompt.