In the quiet moments preceding dawn
slender fingers tickle threads
of somnolence and I stir
quietly slipping from the grace
bestowed upon my dreams by
your gentle touch
as the manifestation of equidistant
desires rises with the sun
I turn into your arms
to seek the solace my soul craves
and I bask in the glow from your
perpetually haunting gaze
Author notes
I know you said to choose a prompt but I got a bit carried away and chose four, I hope that's ok.
Prompts:
2. Slender fingers tickle threads...
3. The manifestation of equidistant desires...
4. From perpetually haunting gaze...
5. Quietly slips from grace...
In a list
A contest entry
- _.:~:._5 SUPER AWESOME PROMPTS_.:~:._ by Erika Elektrikka.
700 points, ended March 30, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow mummy this is an amazing piece and there is such a sensual feel withi this that is strong and prominent.i absolutly love it hehe well done
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Very nice Margaret, very nice indeed. Best of luck in the contest dear.
Love and peace,
mj.
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