i'd do anything
just to see
your blue eyes staring back at me.
i'd give myself away
just so you could feel
the same passion for me as i did you.
i'd die a million times over
just to feel
your arms around my waist
and your body against mine.
i'd turn back time
just for
the scent of your skin..
the feel of your lips..
your breath on my neck..
your hands on my hips..
..& any bit of your attention.
i'd even lie
to myself.
just to pretend,
that for an instant,
you could care about me
a little more than you do
about yourself.
your past.
and your drugs.
but who am i kidding..
Author notes
welp. i have shit luck. what can i say?
this really isn't very good. but i thought i'd add somethin'.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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had to read this again....i can't get over how intense this is, babe. i love it. absolutely love it. i anticipate your next piece.
keep up the fantastic work
xx amy -
had to read this again....i can't get over how intense this is, babe. i love it. absolutely love it. i anticipate your next piece.
keep up the fantastic work
xx amy -
wow....this is amazing...really fucking good. i know exactly what you feel here...and it's not good. but my love, this was excellent....keep up the great write. it is amazing. i lovesss you!!!
xx amy michelle
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The special feature of this write its honesty which I like the most..you are not articicial and not hiding the truth..just simply you talked about the truth of your heart and this is really a difficult job..also when truth is told by heart even the lines said in the prose are turned in the beautiful poetry and this is it..well done...
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