Oh God
while witnessing the imperial portraits
I sensed that despite commending the sculptor
the portraits magnetized me
while jubilating the artist for an awesome sketching
I considered to acclaim the depiction not the maestro
thus, if a woman is around me to make me to contemplate
that she is your baronial rendering for
making me to overwhelm by her resplendence
I submit myself in her arms
as my gratitude to you for sharing with me
such a royal art piece
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Confess to me ADULT CONTENT by acari27.
430 points, ended March 28, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful upside down Bronze contest :) by paulcreates.
1200 points, ended April 5, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great art
wonderful imagry lol who can withstand a beautiful piece like this, temptation can be wonderful sometimes, honest and true to yourself and others, great piece my friend and very artistic.
loved this much.
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Thank you again for your praising words my friend..I am humbled by the words of yours..god bless...
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Art is a subjective thing in more than just taste. How people see art and what art is to the individual is what is truely fascinating.
This poem is art.
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A sincere and sensuous piece, and you are quite correct that women are god's gift of art to we men. That is one of the prettiest Oriental women I have seen in some time.
lovely photo and poem my brother.
Len
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overwhelming and romantic. it brought a smile to my face. thanx for sharing this piece.
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Congratulations
Utterly amazing. So pleased to see a silver trophy adorning this delight. Well done. ~Pamela
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Such a sensitive piece herein. The interaction between the artist, the subject and the viewer is a unique twist on the subject.
Thank you for entering.
Paul -
this is quite intresting though I had to say oh dear when the pic came up while I was at the library. keep doing well my friend
love he rev papa
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well this is just amazing and the girl is beautiful!
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She is the portrait of the heart.
And the inspiration of art!
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well it was a disappointing turnout, but i liked the few entries that i did receive-i will scrape some points for you for entering-as i think you did a commendable job- yes, oh God, seems appropriate for the pic! it seemed to be a confession about lust vs artistic appreciation- but i could be wrong-is there anything youd like to explain about it to me?-you can pm me rather than discuss here if youd like..
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well this is certainly intriguing thanks for entering
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very nice verse and ode to both the art of creation and to the creator. unique and inspiring poetry written here. refreshing work. keep on writing .
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:)
I submit myself in her arms
as my gratitude to you for sharing with me
a royal art piece
well said...beyond words. congrats and best regards!
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