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Alone

Mostly being alone is not fun
But me time,well thats what I need
While I read,alone in a room
I enjoy myself tremenduosly
Ofcourse,being with people is living
But everyone needs some me time
Because there are such things
That others cant understand
Like reading
No one in my family
Is as into reading as me
Thats probably why I'm the only one
Out of four elder sisters
Who has glasses
They think its nerdy
They think its boring
Reading books,pah thats rubbish
That is why I need time alone
To read or to paint
Or maybe just sit
And use my imagination
Me time is good for me
And maybe for you too
So why not try it out
Maybe you'll have fun!

A contest entry

Please give me your honest opinion,I dont mind a hard comment

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  • its so true!


  • Purush
    March 28, 2008

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    ----------------if not excuse me

    you can still beautify the verse with a shining choice of words
    and putting them at right place to look more beautiful
    the whole poem is to read with a swing
    am i not true?


  • Purush
    March 22, 2008
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    All the best

    Good poem with nice thoughts
    All the best in my contest