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Sing Me

Sing me a ditty darling don't be shy
I don't mind just a little cry
Show me you love me any way you choose
but keep on singing those soul filled blues

Kiss me gently as you turn to go
make it romantic and make it slow
Give me your lips in a passionate way
Whisper sweet nothings with the words you say

Keep me on tender hooks nothing less
Play at loves game my dear make me guess
Do you love me or is this a game
Do not tell me let me go insane

Wring all the sap out of my bones
sultry behaviour with sultry tones
Give me the brush off to draw me near
Thats all I ask of you my sweet dear

Now that you have me begging for more
take your leave and walk out that door
I will turn and beg you to return
Now you know that it's your body I yearn

Make me yours and never leave
after such foreplay I would only grieve
Turn back around and come into my nest
where I can show you what I do best


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  • RuthKephart
    April 4, 2008
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    Just back for another look


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 28, 2008

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    Beautifully rhymed. OH I was simply smiling by the time I got to the end. It just made me feel so good. Well done. Best of luck in the contest. ~Pamela

  • RuthKephart
    March 22, 2008
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    This is just one of those poems that the reader can't help but smile after reading Great use of rhyme. I found the meter to be off just a bit in a few places but over all a very good write here. Thank you for your entry and best wishes in the contest
    Ruth


  • Gwenevere
    March 22, 2008

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    Hello!! Long time no see.You are still writing excellent poetry I see.This brought a smile to my face.Have a great Easter, Ros


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    THIS IS SO ADORABLE!!!

    Always loving them no matter what they may do to you. Ah, the wonders of the heart! 's

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