Your femininity does enthrall
As to my heart it does call,
“Come drink and have your fill.”
Dwelling strongly in your spirit
Is passion, and yes, I do hear it
“As even in my dreams, you thrill.”
In a list
A contest entry
- It's All About Love. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended March 30, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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oh daddy this is such a beautiful piece there is such a soft sensual touch in your words aswell as the longing of love and care. it is gentle and beautifully crated, well done daddy
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Very nice indeed! To hear that calling and to feel such passion!
A sweetly sensual wee piece this is!
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very strong piece of tangled emotions.. beautifully crafted piece.. thanx for sharing..
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I never quite know what to expect from you or where your words are going to take me but it's a most pleasurable experience reading your beautifully crafted poetry. Best wishes in the contest.
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