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Beckoning

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your femininity does enthrall

As to my heart it does call,

 

“Come drink and have your fill.”

 

Dwelling strongly in your spirit

Is passion, and yes, I do hear it

 

“As even in my dreams, you thrill.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
  • oh daddy this is such a beautiful piece there is such a soft sensual touch in your words aswell as the longing of love and care. it is gentle and beautifully crated, well done daddy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 22

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    Very nice indeed! To hear that calling and to feel such passion!
    A sweetly sensual wee piece this is!


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 22
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    very strong piece of tangled emotions.. beautifully crafted piece.. thanx for sharing..
  • I never quite know what to expect from you or where your words are going to take me but it's a most pleasurable experience reading your beautifully crafted poetry. Best wishes in the contest.



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