In a world where colorful words live as wavelengths on the air while static steals your show scenes
In a place where acrylic extended nails feel softer than eyeballs and claws of a cat-walks on skin
In a land where ideals still hold together a few minds against the traffic of twisted titles treated
In this city of angels flying away taking lonesome hearts aching with aftertaste of sugarcoated smiles
I just breathe... entertaining pollution inside a body cooler accustomed to pressuring heat
March 22nd 2008
A contest entry
- Inside Your World by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 27, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
^^ Please feel free to ask why the specific comparisons used or to simply give me your take!
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wow, you paint such a vivid picture of your world, the glitz, glamour, and the facades, all part of your work in the business of show, i truly enjoyed this having been in the same kind of theater myself many times....great write.~~Artis
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Ouch! those nails sounds like mine
Awesome write hun, I loved it
Brings it all to life
sis xxx
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lol… yours? Nah!
If anything it’s me who’s guilty of getting my nails done (yes acrylic extensions) just a couple of days ago… 
Thnx 4 checking back on me, Sista <3 <3
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Ouch fingernail in the eye always hurts I like the las lines too Good luck with this Dear auntie
Hope you have a Merry Easter 
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Thank you... it's the eyes that pierce harder!
& a very Happy Easter to you too dear niece
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