The lock's key,
The door's handle,
The brain's cage.
Hunger and war
Ravage our bodies,
Cage our minds.
Peace awaits only love
To unlock our hearts,
And save the world.
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
700 points, ended March 26, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely!
I too see hope and love in this art...
Thank you for entering my contest!
I’m so glad you found inspiration in the prompt picture!
Blessings! Tammy
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Wow you really took this outside the box, superbly penned. All the best in the contest
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i do like the emotiions this poem has its a great take on the promt,good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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WOW!!!! What an incredible take on that picture. You are another one who truly looked deep and went way outside the obvious!!!! Very very very well done and best of luck in the contest
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aww so very good this is one of them poems tht jus t makes you feel that warm feeling and sigh awwwwwwwwwwwwww
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awesome.. very well said.. loved the starting lines and the way you conveyed such strong notions in so simple words.. beautiful, loved reading it... thanx for sharing..
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