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Lust

“I love you”
You say those words
With that deep rasping voice
Into my delicate ears

Skin on skin
Mouths and tongues searching
Your body seeks release
And I am its savior

Love
Has nothing to do with it
You don’t feel with your heart
You feel with what is in your pants

You don’t care
About my heart or what I think
My body
Is all that matters

I love you
But you are breaking me
My heart beats for you
And you are making it bleed

Lust
It burns in your eyes
The way you look at me
It makes me sick

You don’t love me
Regardless of how I feel
You are using my body
And destroying my soul

I feel dirty
Every time I look at you
Every time you touch me
My skin crawls

I can taste lust
In your kisses
I can hear it
In the words you speak

“I love you”…
You whisper in my ear
As lust weaves its lies
In the scratch marks upon my back.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 13, 2008

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    For some reason and I do know why, though I had to admit it...this piece has made me cry, because it's a replay of what happened with me and my ex...my ex said he loved me, but I could see sex in his eyes and his words. I hear from him now and he claims love and asks for sex and those hurts come back to me again, as strong as ever.


  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    March 23, 2008

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    wowie! now that is definately what i call lust although the picture was kinda weird. lol anyway thanks!!! i love this one!!!