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At Ease

Mind never at ease,
feeling all sorts of pain,
never resting at all.
Wishing things would get better,
but all they get is worse.
Promise I wouldn't harm myself,
so I write instead.
Hoping that my words don't hurt,
the people that I love.

Releasing all my pain,

into a small little place.

Trying to fight the tears,

that I keep bottled up.

 

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honest and true the way i feel right now

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  • DrkPoet silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    In a state of depression is always a hard place to be, however sometimes from deep within that depression something beautiful comes from it, such as this write. Try to keep focus even when life seems it's darkest. Thanks for entering


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    Very well written and versed with good flow----Best of luck in the contest, and May you and your family have a Blessed & Happy Easter!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    oh sweet precious niece. life gets hard and difficult because there are challenges that we have to overcome in order to get strong. i am always and forever here for you with arms and ears to comfort with


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 22, 2008

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    words are the voice of heart.. the most powerful tool we've to fight against our frustration and anger.. beautifully written.. thanx for sharing..