I run away
you follow
stomach trembles
cheeks tighten
you collapse
as I let go
Author notes
15 Words
Humor
A contest entry
- Your Best Humor by Kari.
395 points, ended March 23, 2008, 2 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need a laugh by Sarah957.
300 points, ended March 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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HMMMMM was that about what i think it was about?
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LOL, very funny, love your humour. All the best in the contest with it
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I like this one!
It put a smile on my face and I like the imagery in it. Well done and the best of luck!
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Very creative! It's nice to see I'm not the only one with a sense of humor like that! Best of luck in he contest.
Crystal
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AHH lol! This is hilarious! I love the chasing feeling to it lol! Best of luck in the contest!!
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Bravo~
Oh my gosh bro, I never knew you could be that funny!
A sense of humor you have, great won, I'm LMFAO~
Peace, PW
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