love is something that you care
love is something that you share
love doesn't make you fail
you have to give back to make it sail
love isn't money you buy or food you eat
love is precious, love is sweet
love cannot be replaced or moved
love is what smooth inside of you not out
Author notes
enjoy!! it's a really short poem but i hope you don't mind
A contest entry
- Rhyming Rumble 1 ( part one of a 3 part series ) by RuthKephart.
525 points, ended April 5, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think and do you like it?
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Just back for another look
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Wonderful uplifting words. My goodness how precious and beautifully pure.
I loved it. Good flow and wonderful rhyme. You give me hope that our youth of today have wonderful ideas to express ahead. Best of luck in the contest. Well done. ~Pamela 
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You have touched on a positive note here... love is something that is very, very special, nothing could ever replace it. How right you are love certaintly is not money, it is a commodity money can never buy. I did enjoy reading this, well done and best wishes for the contest.
Katie
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Thank you for your entry. A sweet tribute to something all of us can not live without...love Thank you for your entry and best wishes in the contest
Ruth
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