Her name.
Your dagger.
My heart.
The sound of her name
Pierces through my veins
Your dagger cuts me
And you don't even see
My heart breaks when I think of it
My heart is what your dagger slit
Severed in two
And no amount of glue
Can hold it together
You're the one who said our love would last forever
Once again you lie to me
There is no "u" in we
Fishing for the answers
You called me by her name
All in all and in the end
This life you ruined was just a game
Her name.
Your dagger.
My heart.
Author notes
Option: Love
A contest entry
- Enter Me!!!Please Enter!!!Need Entries!!! by Nephalaneous lover.
500 points, ended April 13, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love and Hurt by xofightinirishx3.
495 points, ended May 20, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Her name.
Your dagger.
My heart.
The sound of her name
Pierces through my veins
this is a really strong and powerful opening, it pulled me in and i wanted to keep reading. i understand how you're feeling and i wish you the best. thanks for entering and good luck -
wow this really did deserve the gold amazing. loved this bit the most:
Severed in two
And no amount of glue
Can hold it together
You're the one who said our love would last forever
It rhymed so great
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love the title, it's amazing...wow,
you need to put your option in the author's box, plz and thank you...
your piece is amaizing, i think im in love with it,lol, very emotionally beautiful...good luck in the contest, best of wishes.
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okay, i put my option in the authors notes sorry 'bout that
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i lov this...this exactly how my relationship was...I love him and he loves her...I feel like he don't even care that he hurt the way he did...Just like your poem says everytime I hear her name I flip out...I also love your style..
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ty for commenting, it means a lot!
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wow this is amzaing it's kinda like betrail of the heart. I love it
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ty for reading, i'm glad u enjoyed it!
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