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Chocolate Resurrection

Easter is here and it's time to remember why mankind has another chance.
Eggs of course, the symbol of new life, so here's one more opportunity to make money out of festival.
Second chance awaits as advertisements are displayed on windows,
"Get your second chance here with chocolate sugar fix. You'll not regret sublime taste, nor fear the end is nigh."
Principal shape to keep within theme, eggs of all sizes to suit any mouth!
Choose largest ones and be a light for the season, packaged in colours of beauty, precious gift for loved one.
Rabbit dropping sized eggs don't really display fervour for this time,
as shoppers encouraged to donate readily from wallets and purses with great generosity.
Therefore purchasing and giving chocolate is really what Resurrection is about!
Resurrect those taste buds!



Author notes

6. No, the Resurrection is NOT about eating enough chocolate so you rise from being bored to death.

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  • KayJay
    March 23, 2008

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    Who needs love when you can have chocolate (LOL). Congratulations on the Gold. Well deserved!
    Ken


  • penman gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Oh My!!




    Love this piece You have penned and this gave me a chuckle

    Wonderful take on the prompt~
    Rabbit dropping sized eggs don't really display fervour for this time,;f

    These lines grab
    Keep that quill dancing my Friend...
    Gosh Now I am Hungry ALL Your fault
    Thank You for sharing Your Humor also Voice~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    ok yes , you know i love those choccy eggs,forget the contest. where can i resurrect my taste buds xxx good luck


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    this is an intresting and yet a deeply profound take on the prompt. i love your new writing stle aswell. it beautiful says alot well done with this gran


  • Shikamaru-Nara
    March 22, 2008

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    Very interesting write.

    At first when I saw the title, I thought, "This is going to be good." While also thinking it was going to be about resurrected people and have chocolate mixed in somewhere.

    Didn't you trick me! XD

    Anyhoo, excellent write.

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