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Sometimes

SOMETIMES

the thought of you lift my soul

to dance in all motions!

while the whispers of you

tap upon the pane of my window

streaming the rain upon our valley

containing two hearts

to beat as one...

there

i am assured

until the last breathe

there will forever be...

our always ...not just 

SOMETIMES....

KT

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  • Frozentearz
    March 23, 2008

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    YOu have penned some deep thoughts within this one,
    a very heartfelt poem and I thank you for sharing it with us.
    Many Blessings,
    Frozentearz


    • ICULookn
      April 1, 2008
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      Many thanks for allowing me your most appreciated feedback on my words.... blessings


  • transcendental baby gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    Oh girl, this is beautiful!!!

    • ICULookn
      April 1, 2008
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      Many humble thanks......for reading and your feedback......!