I've got 3 angels and im running around
All around the back of my mind
where everyone goes to dissappear
I text angel, Stay with me
I cant hide how i feel, and i wont force you to feel the same
I am mad at a place where im feeling alsorts of different similar things
You all give me a quiet mind
And i love you
You all give me quiet mind
And i love you
Until the end
Until the end
Give me the will to go on, To build
A life of my own that is so hard to find
I'll try and keep hold of everything new
And wont let them go like i've done with old friends (my old friends)
Still hearing voices, from past, fro present
They tell me how to live, how not to die
When to talk, when to listen
When to spend, when to save
When to turn to my friends that taught me
Being who i am is all that i can be
Give me a quiet mind and i
I still love you all
You all give me a quiet mind
And i love you.
Author notes
More of a re-write of Quiet mind- mainly about having 3 girls in my life that i really care for, and they always make me smile no matter what.
A contest entry
- Blue October by grace elizabeth.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i agree with the people below me. it feeling like a song. and it flows so well. the repetition is fierce. i love it.
Good Luck -
Wonderful write, feels like a song, is it? I love the repetition, and the inversion. Very nicely done with a lot to think about within these lines. Great flow too.
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Reads like a song..
Great write
Good luck
Simon
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