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[ dark and light ]

dark and light
on equal time
equinox

In a list

A contest entry

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  • maralisa silver member
    March 27, 2008
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    this is great good luck in the contest


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    You have hit on the essence of this contest, the balance of dark and light, a wonderful milestone in the passing of seasons. Equinox is a Special time and it should be acknowledged. Well done!
    Thanks for your entry.

    Dennis


  • azure85 gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Nicely done, a good haiku that illustrates the vernal equinox!