"Your my favorite son"
...I was your only one...
"Your so perfect in my eyes"
...it was all poisioned lies...
There's a story here you won't read
It's written in the tears that I bleed
In blood stained memories of the past
Of things that could never truly last
"Your cold, cruel and Look after number One"
....As if any one could forgive what I had done....
"You'll grow up strong, And you'll forget the past"
....Like there was a choice, I learn to survive fast....
There's truth here, I'm nothing but a Monster
If i have a soul. It's barely anything more then a blur
It's proven in the dark recesses of my mind
To which I've managed to keep you all so blind
"He's not worth it tonight, My truck seats mean to much"
....Laying on the concrete Your words had a caring touch....
"He's not worth the time, Save him yourself If you want to"
....They were kids, It's not like they knew what to do....
There's all I'm worth in the lines above
A creature, So Incapable of feeling real love
If my own blood couldn't do it, why should you
Even if you can I'll never be sure it's true
"Your to expnesive, I think you should leave"
....Your words weren't all that hard to belive....
"Your a disgrace, I can't belive you managed to survive"
....I do it for spite, Cause you can't stand that I'm alive....
There is nothing left for me to say
Maybe you will all understand someday
I won't awnser any question so don't bother inquire
Just memories, that burn somewhere among an old fire...
Author notes
Don't ask.
A contest entry
- Recognizing Defeat by LaylaLace.
600 points, ended March 23, 2008, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I realy think this is your most honest poem. You should try these more often. Nothing about you is monstrous. Your heart is one of the kindest I have had the pleasure to feel.
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Oh it's been so long!! I have missed your works.. As it was before though better, your writing is great!! Sad but again beautiful..
Peace to you, jetleena
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As always my pet, you do so well and nothing ever is as personal and passionate as the true words that are written. I love you my dear, anytime you need me you know where to find me.
*Immortalbeauty*
p.s. rayne says hello
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Rejection burns worse than any fire or acid. This was a very personal poem, thank you for sharing this.
Good luck in the contest.
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I will not ask, since that is your wish! However... I am here, if you want to talk. This poem is filled with such pain. I feel your pain, I am sorry this has happened. I like the background, the way you put this together, brought us all in to your world! Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~
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im asking,
whats wrong,
and what do you mean in this poem,
*hugs you tightly*
really really good poem,
i love it,
i hope your ok,
love bri xxxx
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