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Maturity Romance

Sickening. Sickening.
While the clock keeps ticking.
She’s a stressed romantic,
edging borderline frantic.

A slight of hand,
Will he get away?
No,
This is  just a game she plays.

Sickening. Sickening.
While the clock keeps ticking.
She’s a stressed romantic,
edging borderline frantic.

She draws him close,
And bruises his ego.
And tells herself,
They’ve got a long way to go.

Sickening. Sickening.
While the clock keeps ticking.
She’s a stressed romantic,
edging borderline frantic.

Author notes

soo pretty much this is a crappy poem written for some shitty class that i dont' even go to anymore. :\

Did this make any sense??

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  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Wow, it isn't crappy. Maybe you should have more faith in your ability. You write very strong rhymes. You have great repetition here and a good flow and story.


    • no-way-ap
      April 13, 2008
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      thanks

      well thank you for your support. greatly apreciated.