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Poetically Speaking...

Looking at me...like,

who is she,

I am

theIncredible1

Ephiphany

You cut me,

I bleed,

while you open me up

and plant your seed,

indeed

you need

something more

arms open wide,

while you

close the door,

need I say more?

Of course I will,

listen to my words

as my heart spills...

ink across your lonely face,

this is my place,

erase the hate

from the slate,

so that we can relate.

Take in no prisoners,

make no mistake,

kiss the temptataion

and accept the fate.

Author notes

Just messin round with the office folks who tickin me off this Good Friday...teehee

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    Wwow Sis....do they still work in your office????

    Geez..how I love this reflection of you...and I really hope they loved it as much as I did

    Good luck in this 100th contest
    Luv ya
    XXJeannette


    • Ephiphany
      April 10, 2008

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      Sissyyyyyyy

      Luv you too...I miss you sooo much
      Thank you for reading, and yes they still work here they think because I am quiet they can just say anything to me....I don't have that problem anymore wonder why


  • Kari gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Lol I wonder did you show this to the ones ticking you off ?
    Perhaps you should so that way they can tremble and know not to miss with you!
    Kick Ass attitude


  • FifthDove
    April 1, 2008

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    Co workers can really get on the last nerve sometimes. lol I like how you have expressed your self in this poem. thank you for the entry and best wishes always

  • judmc
    March 28, 2008

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    Nice Poem

    Quite a clever well written and tasteful poem
    I quite enjoyed reading it.Best Wishes. Try"The Waife"
    or "Peter's Girl" on my patch Thanks for sharing this lovely poem
    with me.George ++++


  • darell
    March 27, 2008

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    Okay

    Taking the bait. So I can relate.
    No need for hate. Don't know my fate.
    But hope its not to late to enter your
    precious gate


  • mzmikki
    March 23, 2008
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    This is really good lol!! But your work is always good...


  • D Saul So Sexy
    March 23, 2008

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    awww ma i must say u did it tha right way pimpin tha pen cuz you seen warm glad you let words still ya joy instead

    ya boi D


  • moluv10
    March 22, 2008

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    Great job releasing your frustration here. I encounter some of the same things at my job as well. People are more worried about evreybody else instead of doing their jobs. Thank you for always speaking your mind. Keep up the great work Piff.


  • HaleyMary
    March 21, 2008

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    lol. I love this, Sis. Way to feel better about the day by writing about it. This poem reminds me of how I felt during the summer and had a co worker that would bug the crap out of me. I suppose every place has their bad apples, though. Great way of putting it into words and powerful emotion expressed, too. Keep writing.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 21, 2008

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    Powerful

    Hahahah, this was just brilliant. And this piece sums up in so many words my dear friend Piff. Take no prisoners make no mistake, kiss the temptation and accept the fate. Phew, now that was so goooood.

    Wonderful self-description Piff. Brilliant emotion behind this.

    Love always
    Wayne Leon
    x

    • Ephiphany
      March 21, 2008
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      Oh...lol

      Wayne, I was just foolin around with these nuts at my job. They been aggravating me all day, just for no reason...well ok, pay back but I didnt want to be bothered

      Thanks,
      Im about to leave work now, enjoy ur weekend, just in case I wont be back until Monday

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