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Music to me

When I'm feeling down
When its chilling all around
When my emotions aren't quite sound
When I could crumple to the ground

I run straight up to my room
I turn my music on
*up loud*
I listen with my heart
I'm filled up to the brim with pure emotion now.

When I've had a horrid day
When I'm in a bad way
When my heart is cold as clay
When my edges start to fray

I make my way up to my room
I put my head phones in
*up loud*
I listen with my soul
My emotions drain out slowly now.

When depression washed over me
When crying comes too easily
When I only wish they all could see
When it's not so easy being happy

I wait til late at night
I turn my iPod on
*down low*
I listen with my eyes
My emotion builds inside of me.
Swelling huge capacity
Filling every cavity
Leaving unstability.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    May 2

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    i love your rhyming. i think the words could really suit a song! the whole asterix thing with the volume made me laugh. a cool poem. good luck and thanks for entering.

  • maralisa gold member
    April 14
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    i think music is the best thing in the world good luck in the contest

  • Somebody-New
    April 3

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    music is by far the best thing in the world and i think this could make a cool song because of the repitition in it. good luck in the contest!

  • Bee gee silver member
    March 21

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    nice

    this is nice music can be such a comfort.i'm not into sad soppy stuff and i've never liked amamzing grace it's to sad.even though some can sing it with a bit of aup beat way.wheni've been sick or in hospital i had to have my music.i love gospel music too.the nice upbeat stuff.i love to tap my feet to the music.i sing to stuff with the karooke machine for fun .mom said i was in a shopping mall when i was 3 and my feet were dancing to the music.i just love music.


    • i-love-my-bra
      March 22
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      :)

      Thanks so much i know how you feel, but i actually kinda like amazing grace XD its because it was the first song i sang when i joined my church youth group, and i liked it i like depressing music because it makes me feel better XD

  • maralisa gold member
    March 21
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    this has great feelings good luck with the contest i like filling every cavity leaving unstability

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