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Just another line

To and fro
No other goal
A good time
the length of a line

Cloud spread white
In the evening sky
Out of sight
A page turned, ink ran dry

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Prompt:
"and I'm nothing more than a line in your book..."

Limit - 30 words

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  • Pisces Pieces
    April 3, 2008
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    Wow this is really great! It says so much, I read it a few times and each time gained something new from it...getting used as the person who was the user just simply moves on as though no big deal, onto the next line...that is what I see.

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  • BehindTheShadow
    March 21, 2008
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    Great job on the prompt..