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Is this all?

Gaze over me with vacant eyes,
A part of your story but not the title.
Go on, past me, forget me.

May the story be good enough to read again.

Author notes

"and I'm nothing more than a line in your book..."

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  • Ithica silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    Such sadness! I say let him walk on by... Find someone who will try to read between the lines... Yay!


  • BehindTheShadow
    March 21, 2008
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    I enjoyed this. Good luck!