Whispers in ears,
warm embraces,
surround the soul.
Kisses so passionate,
"I love you's" so real.
Gentle touches,
kind eyes,
make me melt
like ice cream.
Wanting forever
to continue
beyond the grave.
I Love You
Author notes
I dedicate this to my fiancé Matthijs. I Love You!
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 18 of 18
-
Matthijs is a lucky fellow to have you hun
-
aww so cute
i love happy poems like this <3
-
make me melt
like ice cream.
I love that! very sweet! You must have an amazing fiancé
-
Very sweet and full of the emotions of youthful love... Very nice flow and structure... Well done.
-
Very beautiful and a great
feeling of love. It's a very
wonderful feeling when you have
someone in your life that makes
you feel like this all of the
time. Lovely work here!
Jeremy0826 -
aww this is so sweet! I love it!
-
beautiful
I agree with the poet, Grimoire -
Captures some of the essence of what love is succinctly, simplistically... which is sometimes a good thing. This poem reads smooothly and is clear, eloquent in its defining easily what it is trying to state... However, this line:
~I love you's so real.~
should probably have quotations around it, or something to seperate it as a seperate clause within that line. The poem stalls right there for the reader has to read that line twice, to figure out that...
~ "I love you's" so real.
would make the reader understand your meaning with the very first read.
until exhale,
Grimoire
-
great write sare-bear
am i ever glad i told you to get out of that damn box!
if you are this addicted to ap and i had to keep reading rhyhmy lovey crap i think i'd want to hurt you
hehehe
Tasha
-
Very sweet and endearing.
I hope it lasts for ever!
-
I really like the poems you penned for Matthijs hun, This has got to be your best by far. I'm sure he was very touched indeed.
-
Just gorgeous, I love this. Wonderful descriptions, simple yet so meaningful. Great work.
-
Very sweet and passionate words
you've penned here. This is a great
dedication to your beloved. I wish
you both many wonderful years ahead!
Jeremy0826 -
So much love and passion,
Your fiance is a lucky man. I hope he knows how lucky.
But love that strong is also fragile and should be handled with the greatest of care.
You tell him I said so.
Also, thank you (and your mom) for commenting on my work. Words of support are always appreciated.
-
Now this is a love poem above all others. I see your love continuing into the next life. Great write!
-
Lovely Poem
What a sweet love poem "warm embraces,kisses so passionate", "wanting to continue behond the grave"
That's real dedication and commitment.I quite liked
reading it.It took me back a few years.
and talking about Love if you have time try
"Blue Eyes" or "Little Girl" Let me know what you think George(JUDMC) Best Wishes for your Love life
-
Another beautiful dedication to your fiance! I hope you show him these.. they are truely so beautiful hun.
Just lovely!
-
-
Thanks hun, I show him all of my poems, this one is his favourite.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 18 of 18
