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To Fly

You fell
In a hole so deep
Thorns trapped you
But I gave you my hand
You flown to clouds
It is was your flight
I only said you could

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"and I'm nothing more than a line in your book."

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  • D u a n a gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    wow- amazing! This is so well written. In my life I am still trapped by thorns- there is no better way to put it: a thicket of thorns. You just inspired my next poem. Thank you for the amazing imagry.


  • I s m a
    March 22, 2008
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    =] beautiful


  • BehindTheShadow
    March 21, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt.