A few words
nothing more
Describing
a love I thought
would never fade
My heart
sinks
into darkness
realizing
I fell like a fool
into love
and you never
cared
Author notes
"and I'm nothing more than a line in your book..."
A contest entry
- Quickie-Prompt in 30 words by BehindTheShadow.
525 points, ended March 21, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Liked the brevity of the lines, the flow and the interpretation of the quote given to inspire writers in this contest. Congratulations for winning bronze in this contest.
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very well written.. i can relate to your piece and i guess almost everyone goes through this phase once in their lives.. when it seems like that we were fools caring about a person who didn't give a damn.. but thats how life is.. i liked it how you conveyed such strong emotions in few words.. thanx for sharing..
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Lots of emotion in here...thanks. Great job!!
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