Through all the lies that you've deceived
My broken heart is all I've grieved
You made me hurt, you made me cry
But in the end you made me die
I'm stranded here and all the while
I'm abandoned here in innocent exile
You didn't mean the things you've said
And the next day you found me dead
Lying on the floor with a bottle in my hand
And a note in the other so you can understand
Author notes
okay so its not done I got stuck
I don't know..
Comments
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i really like it so far...cant wait for the finished piece..
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wow
its really good. so much power and emotion. MORE! -
I really like what you have here so far. Can't wait to see it finished.
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Wow this good now. It is really good. Like you can really feel the emotion in it! I really cant wait to read it when it is done!!!!!!! good write so far! you get 3 clappys now!
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Chrissi
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