Lives written
in sentences of passage,
by a mind's diary
kept in vault of indifference.
Always so incomplete
to heart
who thought
words I love you
ended with different period.
Author notes
"and I'm nothing more than a line in your book..."
A contest entry
- Quickie-Prompt in 30 words by BehindTheShadow.
525 points, ended March 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting development ...
of the prompt. I am not a big fan of leaving out the articles, so poems like this always jar me in reading them, but otherwise, this is a good job.
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry.
Splendid wording and rhythm
Thanks for sharing.
Tony
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beautifully penned, just a true story of humanity, excellent work and good luck.
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Wonderful penning, and best wishes in the comp
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Very nice penning....
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This is very well done Very beautiful kinda thought provoking too, Good luck in the contest
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this is such a powerful write and you have penned perfectly with the prompt. it made me stop and think. a true gold winner i believe well done grandpa
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Eloquent as always. Your words never fail to capture the heart of the prompt you write about. Once again I am left wondering how on Earth someone can write something so beautifully so effortlessly. Wonderful piece worthy of Gold I am sure!
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