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I Fell.

I fell from your pedestal.
A single tear,
Into an ocean of hopelessness.
I fell from your life.
A solitary spark,
Into a void of despair.

I simply fell apart.

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"and I'm nothing more than a line in your book..."

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    Great interpretation of the word prompt in this contest. Liked the thoughts expressed here - looks like the host thought the same Congratulations on the gold in this contest.


  • BehindTheShadow
    March 21, 2008
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    Brilliant!!