When you need some love,
When you need to scream,
When you need to hide,
When you need to dream.
Mommy's always here.
When you need to collapse,
When you want to share your soul,
When you just want to be,
When you feel out of control.
Mommy's always here.
Whatever you may need, Wherever you go,
Whoever you become, I just want you to know--
I'll always be your Mommy.
I love WHO you are,
I'll never try to change you,
and I'll never be too far!
Author notes
Jackie MacNear
For my 4 year old son, Jamie and my 2 year old daughter, Kylie. I love you both with all my heart.
A contest entry
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450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 39 entries
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Awesome
Sweet poem of a mother's love. Great write....smooth flow tight rhymes....again...Awesome
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Baeutiful. I cant wait for kids of my own!
Mylee -
Beautiful, just beautiful. I like how you chose to rhyme in this, perfect flow! I like the repetition of "Mommy's always here" A treasure to read, Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Never be too far!
And the love you bring, is the love they will know!
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Excellent!
Wow...I was all over this. I have a 4 (just turned 5) year old daughter. She is past incredible (if you ask most partents I guess??? lol). I was in this 'til the end. Very sweet; engaging...your expression of love for your children leaked from my screen onto my desk. I think they'll love this when they read it for themselves. Great write here...
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That is so beautiful, I am 35 with four children ages 14 13 10 and 8.... This is exactly the way that I feel about mines...
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How wonderful these sentiments you have expressed for your children. Hope you read it to them some day. Even when the teen years come along you might post this on the fridge for all to see. These years can be very trying and I know you will always love them, but can you like them too when they get into those teen things? Hope so. Lovely poem written here.
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You rock!
My sis Is The awesome-ist Mommy ever! I hope someday, maybe Ill be a great mommy like you!
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Your children are well loved. What beautiful sentiments. Your children must be as sweet as my son is, though I can't imagine it (sorry, I'm biased). Help them stay, in some small way, the people they are today.
Thanks, CaliOkie.
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well written words of love for your children. And they know now and will know. Youmay want to do them in sometimes, I had, oops have, 4 and we survived each other, even through the teen years.
Buddy
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Love love it!
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Mums...they are like big old hearts in the sky.
You seem to have conveyed the ancient spirit of a mothers love. Never ending and undying.
What was that song...
Nobody will ever love ya like your mum,
even when she hits ya on the bum.
It's so hard to think how beautiful we start out,
until the big old world swallows ya up.
You have made me feel once again,
now Im going to call my blessed Irish mum, cuase im so lucky to still have her and tell her to come by for a pint and a hug...
Great poem, every word was warm and wonderful,
those kids are blessed lassie.
Blessings poetic gypsy,
LOWELL POE.
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Awww so beautiful here, so loving and sweet, just explains everything, for your son and daughter, how lucky they are to have you as their mom...
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its sooooo sweet.. ya true moms are always there for their children no matter what.. her words and her selfless love always soothe the soul.. a very beautiful write.. thanx for sharing..
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SWEET
This is so sweet of you to write for you children. Its very cute. I adore this poem. I'll always be your Mommy.
I love WHO you are,
I'll never try to change you,
and I'll never be too far!
I love the last stanza it sums up the poem beautifully. Lovely write, emotionally penned.
Dani
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