Run like the wind
my princess
while the sunrise
flows in your veins.
The world belongs to you.
Embrace it and flourish like
the lillies of the field.
Whose beauty adorn the earth
with divine purpose of living.
As you discover new dimensions
of life on the wings of promise.
Author notes
Happy birthday Namita
A contest entry
- Flowers for her hair by tara wilson.
2250 points, ended April 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a wise poem and I love that you shared your wisdom here in this lovely poem for Namita - thanks so much for joining our little party for her..
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Your poetry always speaks of the positive and I am so happy to see that you've passed that light on to Namita too.
What lovely words of inspiration you've given her. A poem that sings and dances, and also sings of Namita's grace.
Thank you for writing this for her.
~ Nicolette
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Wow, thank you so much!!
This is so beautiful... sunrise flows in your pen's ink, m'friend and the world belongs to your pen! And you, certainly are on the wings of beauty and promise... adorning the world with love and light 
and indeed today you adorned my heart with both! Love you, thank you so much for your kindness!
- namita
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What a beautiful birthday dedication...such lovely imagery and flow...it makes the reader feel so light and comfortable...truly a wonderful gift...
A pleasure to read...
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This was simply beautiful my dear
As always your reaching out wiht beautiful
words. This was a blessing to read.
Love,
Passions
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well done
Nicely written and expressive. But shouldn't "adorn" be "adorns"?
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A most amazing write
I just love this. Especially *life on the wings of promise* You have penned one outstanding poem. I wish you all the luck in the contest.
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Very lovely birthday poem for your friend. Emotion is strong and apparent here and the overall feel is uplifting.
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Ah, just lovely! "Life on the wings of promise." That breathes of inspiration and hope and makes me feel like I, too, can fly and discover divine dimensions.
Thank you and bless you for this write! Much needed today.
By the way, your title caught my eye as I just wrote a poem, "Child of Grace," so I know this wasn't coincidence.
And, Happy Birthday, Namita! What a touching tribute you have penned. Be blessed!
Kel
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I like your message and what your writing about. Nature is definitly a beautifuly and wonderous thing to behold. And well worth writing about, like so many things are.
Though I do think your poem needs a little more. Not in any bad way, just to make the nature your portraying come out even more beautiful within your poem.
Nice start though and good luck! -
Very beautiful penned words.
I loved the part when you said, 'sunshine thru her veins. Enchanting and sweet nectar of feelings.
Good luck, and keep writing.
E
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its beautifully written.. nature is so picturesque and you've amazingly portrayed that in your words.. thanx for sharing..
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