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Marital Pain

I felt the pain and misery
you brought into my life,
I was badly hurt
I didn't want to stay your wife.

I needed an escape
to be free of your love,
I even hoped for angels
while praying to God above.

Where was that someone
who could free me from this pain?
the longer I felt trapped with you
my heart began to strain.

I hated it when you'd hit me,
so much heart break and fear,
without remorse you had a fit
I wanted so badly to disappear.

How could it have been love?
you hurt me in many ways,
I faced such awful abuse
you had me crying for days.

When I finally left your side
my life became anew,
I went through the healing process
leaving you was right to do.

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  • JustAnOrdinaryGirl
    March 21, 2008
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    Amazing poem. Thank you for entering it in my contest


  • BluRosePoet8488
    March 21, 2008

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    Talking about ripping the heart out. WOW! I'm sorry that you had to go through this. I can't imagine the pain that you have been dealing with. I hope all is better. This is very tender, heartflet poem. Thanks afor sharing and good luck.
    ~Donna~


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 21, 2008

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    This is so sad. Oh my... That had to be hard I couldn't even imagine. The Hard truth about life indeed. This was very well written.

    Dani