Whispers traced across her skin,
Pictured promises spreading like poison,
Her little secret kept from the world,
Her whispered words echoing through time,
The pain of her loss,
The emotion in her voice,
Of each promise breaking like china,
Shattered on the road of distraught dreams,
Driving away from the truth of you or me,
Our words falling upon the deafness of her despair,
Tumbling through the loss of reality,
Verging on the edge of insanity,
Never to return from the edge of the universe,
Lost from all contact,
All voices blocked out,
Except his,
Only he can bring her back,
But even his voice is a whisper,
Against the crushing waves,
Of her driven depression,
Caused by her hero,
Her knight in glistening steel,
Transformed into the demon of her troubles,
In a whispered instance,
Author notes
Hope you like it! It was option 3.
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Comments
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Like it/ No I adore this write love it the story told in poem and you made the whispers heard loud and clear love it!
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this is beautifully written for the prompt with such powerful wording and description in it. well done sweetie
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