Hollowed thoughts are filled with visions of beauty
As a silhouette chasse before me
Lustful thoughts flow so loosely
Loathing what I seem to see
Using femininity as prerequisite
Colliding with feministic retort
Insidious forms that is immaculate
Needful of that very thought
As Nefertiti stands in the distance
Tolerating my insolent stare
Ignoring my subservient existence
Oblivious of me being there
Not a regular observation, but a recurring
Hallucination
Author notes
Acrostic-- At least 12 lines long ( I tried sorry)
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest full of Options by tears.of.silence.
600 points, ended April 14, 2008, 30 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
Admiring a woman with the beauty of a queen from afar, yet she does not know that you are there, or just plan fantasties of a woman that you admire, this is a great write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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It was still a beautiful poem. That's mostly why I write freely so that I can share my expressions and not have to follow any guidelines..."Using femininity as prerequisite" Love that line! You did wonderful Mr. Thanks for reading my poem! Keep Writing!
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Acrostic Magic
This a very beautiful piece of art you have painted. I am not "Hallucinating" and I see the meaning of being in this state of mind. You have done a dynamic acrostic.........Ma
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I think you did great here.
Vivid and broad words of a true hallucination.
Good luck
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