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Springtime is Here...

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Take my hand my lady love…
Walk with me through the wildflowers
    for our springtime has arrived…

Let me kiss your soft lips,
    caress your smooth skin,
          gaze deeply into your eyes…

Let the warm sunshine caress your cares away,
    let us love each other
          as we always have…

Is that heat from you I feel?
Or is it just the sunshine
    that is caressing your soul?

Let us lay out our picnic blanket,
    feed each other,
          as our passions rise…

Let us make love with each other,
    let us show love for each other
          in ways only we know how…


© Jonathan Wikkins March 21, 2008
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  • walkinthereign
    May 18, 2008

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    Impressive

    This poem is really romantic. I love the stanza:

    Is that heat from you I feel?
    Or is it just the sunshine
    that is caressing your soul?


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    April 14, 2008

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    Wow! I really like this, similar to the newest I just wrote. To a point. Where is the love? Honestly, where does it go? I am glad to see you won a silver trophy in this! In Love & Light... Blessed Be!
    ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • Brazos silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    Beatifully written song of passion.

    Thank you for entering our contest, and good luck to you.

    Novy and Brazos


  • ennovy silver member
    March 21, 2008
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    This truly spring affecting passion...thank you for entering our contst......Novy & Brazos