Oh my love
I only reminisce the final words of making love
and then how and when I am modulated
and you are reformed, my room is sublimated
my bed is transformed, I am absolutely unknown
I am just left in bewilderment discovering you
in the midmost of the deluge recording my identity
imparting the moon behind as support
apprehending the trees of euphony for complimenting us
Oh my love
A contest entry
- It's All About Love. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended March 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lose Yourself in Words by myusikah.
425 points, ended June 11, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful word useage, full of soft, lovely imagery
perfect entry into this contest, I think you lost yourself in in love and in words.
Good Luck!
Blessings,
Sassy
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..."and you are reformed, my room is sublimated
my bed is transformed, I am absolutely unknown..."
These are my favorite lines. I really think they are the central justice of the poem.
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That is good, my favorite parts are
"imparting the moon behing as support
apprehending the trees of euphony for complimenting us"
I like it, it's really good. Good luck!
--> pia♫♪
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wow
this is really heart felt, its soft but emotional. good job!
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Beatuiful!
This is like a dreams...a beautiful one...
imparting the moon behind as support
apprehending the trees of euphony for complimenting us
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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BEAUTIFUL
Hello,
I have just finished reading your words and wish to let you know just how much I have enjoyed reading your entyr.Your write is so full of emotion, and this emotion can be felt by the reader.Your words are soft and sensual, and I simply adore these lines...
and you are reformed, my room is sublimated
my bed is transformed, I am absolutely unknown
I am just left in bewilderment discovering you
in the midmost of the deluge recording my identity
You have written this well, with only being allowed 10 lines to express love, your write has certainly achieved this because i know just how hard it is to really express love in a write that only allows a few lines.Your write speaks volumes as does your heart.
I wish you all the best in this contest my dear poet friend.Take care and many blessings to you.
~Angel~
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brilliant
truly wondrous word flow...mysterious, sensuous and liberating!
you are reformed, my room is sublimated
my bed is transformed, I am absolutely unknown
congrats and best regards, spiritual poet
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