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A Teardrop

A teardrop formed before my eyes
from what i feel I wanted to cry,
The thought of losing you I feel i'll die
But I wont give up, i'll stay aand fight.

I love you so much I want you to hear,
I don't want to lose you thats my fear.
I can't stand how I feel,
'Til Death Do Us Part was and is our deal.

So if I go before my time,
Just know it was not a crime.
Im crying now even as I write
But I know that we'll stand up and fight.

I can't sleep cause im crying,
Im losing you and I know im dying.
Deep down inside I want to die,
But I made a promise never to leave your side.

This was written about a month ago. I thought she was leaving me but were still together and now were happy. Have you ever felt this way?

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  • xoxo ohh its tessa
    April 3, 2008
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    that was really good yo i like it you really love this grl i can so tel

  • devils devotion
    March 31, 2008

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    yes

    baby i felt this way ariund the same time i thought i was going to lose because of my dad.i know that i will never take my life just because of my dad. baby please dont say this ever again.