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A Journey of Mystery

Magical music gliding softly, smoothly
without effort in the wind.
Gentle hands grasping a feather
on a guided tour.

Grazing a cheek as it passes by
to a destination of origin.
Potent in design;
effortlessly marking its spot.

An arrow that is being released,
unconstrained making its way.
Undiscernible it wanders until its
target is fractured.

Author notes

Prompt : Combo Whispers, secrets and feathers - I was feeling adventurous
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  • Pearl-1
    March 23, 2008

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    yes you was feeling adventurous when you wrote this poem..good luck in the contest.. xxx


  • creationsfromheart
    March 22, 2008
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    is beautiful thank you for the entry I could see a feather drifting as I read this


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 21, 2008
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    you stole my spot