Jonareau is a man of power greater than anyother man.
A tall dark haired muscular messiah warrior
brandishing his mighty double edged sword
forged by the fires of the belly of Earth.
One edge blackened the other made white.
Walking in and out of both darkness and light at will.
Called upon to rid the worlds of their torment
keeping the light in the light and the dark in the dark,
conquering all beasts of burden.
A High Priest named Loeman falls prey
to deception debauchery and corruption.
Leoman bears the burdens of the darkness
a cross of death, disease and destruction.
The cries of children soiled by the streets,
clawing at the heart of Loeman.
Using powers of telepathy calling Jonareau,
Loeman is losing his battle and will to survive.
Maiden Mistress named Malicious
holds the attention of Jonareau
for she speaks only of the ways of love.
Drawn by magnetic attraction
desires untouched in the physical.
Heart to heart and mind to mind,
a sanctuary of inner peace.
Jonareau holds both worlds together.
Author notes
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Comments
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Such an awesome take
to spin this tale
for all of us here
to read about this picture.
You have done an outstanding job
with your story here.
Thank you
Riftkin
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This is a great start my hetane. I enjoyed it. I liked the name Maiden Mistress Malicious. Yet, she wasn't malicious.
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Very good write here
You write witrh such great flow to your work I truly enjoyed the write
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