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Found the source

Surrounded by darkness..
I tremble whilst going forward,
I shiver and try to move about,
to see if i can feel someting!

I start to see a spark
of light,
with excitement i run towards it,
I am close now,
I felt it.

That's when I realise,
what it is..
it's my star,
my angel,
God's gift for me!

I found the source..
my prince who brought life,
into my lifeless world,
who brought colour into,
my colourless world..!


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  • Blooming Poet
    March 23, 2008

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    Brillent poem. Loved it, especially here:

    I found the source..
    my prince who brought life,
    into my lifeless world,
    who brought colour into,
    my colourless world..!