Lips, unclad --
sensually trembling
Familiar urges, lurking,
-- underneath randomness.
Gliding inside, nudging gently.
Sex slave, heartthrob -- obeys willingly
Towering, hard, erect.......
Magically seducing every longing
Volcanic explosion,
--satisfies
Author notes
'LUST'
'Lustful Urgings Show Themselves".
Double Acrostonym ---Extremely Difficult Form
Photo from: http://www.myspace.com/georgeasenov
In a list
A contest entry
- Acrostonym (Insane challange!) by drumdog79.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Three Way Split -Gold, Silver, and Bronze by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended April 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
new writer, would love critique and feedback
Comments
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very sexy and easy to read "
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This is great, i like your writes very much
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Thank you Deceit. I appreciate your reading and commenting my poems. Jen
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Wow, so heated - thanks for your entry.
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ohhhhhh yummy! lol
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the guy, the words, or BOTH. He is quite yummy to look at.
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all of it! haha
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Oh my...*sigh* hot hot hot!
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Congratulations on the well-deserved gold. I know you worked hard on this....and it shows!
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well done difficult form there gal and Volcanology happens to be an interest of mine
Hmmnnn....didn't we used to date in Pompeii? Your father operated the Pompeii Coffee shop down by the public baths? made damn good mocha, remember how we used to stop there after a hard day of picking Olives and taunting the minotaur? Yeah, guess I best not be taking you to the San Francisco zoo huh? LOL! (JK)
Yeah, ...damn....we shoulda left Pompeii two days earlier and not stay for the big weiner roast huh?
LOL!
Len
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Thank you Len, for reading my poem. you my friend are full of stories. I have read many in your comments on Ap in the past few months. Curious if they're real or make believe.. hmmmm.. something tells me real, OR you have a very active imagination.lol Jen
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Amazing. Brilliant. Sexy. Wow.
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i am thoroughly impressed - and damn happy
you got the gold! Write on Love, lane
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Wow
I'm not really sure what to say about a poem like this. The word choice works very nicely for the subject? Or, Nice job. ~Gar -
Wow, yours is great. Especially since I know how hard they can be. I did finally get one submitted that I think is right. Maybe mine is not the best poetry, but I was aiming for the form. Best wishes in the contest, and thanks for your support.
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excellent job, and the form is quite stimulating
regardless of the requirements mandated. thanks for a lovely read~~Artis
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thanks for stopping in and commenting. It is greatly appreciated. Jen
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Wow, of course I had to go to the other contest to see what form this is, and hats off to you. I may try one, but I better make sure I have quite a while to spend on it. Even without the hidden words, this is a great poem. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Thanks Whisper. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. this was a lot of fun to do, I hope the contest gets many entries. I think it is quite unique. Jennifer
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Amaxing! I can see how it took you two days. I'm impressed with your effort but you created a masterpiece.
Love,
Amera♥
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Thanks amera, this was a very original contest and I could not let the challenge pass me by, thanks for commenting. Jennifer
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schaweet
Bingo, someone got it! This is exactly what I was looking for. People seem to be scared of this challange so right now you are front runner. It's a shame too because the other entries were good, just lacking one requirement. But this poem doesn't lack anything. The acronym, the acrostic, the uniform meaning that connects both with each other and the oeverall poem. Great job.
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Great, glad it was up to par. I love challenges. But I was hoping a few would get in, so I could win fair and square.lol Thanks for the comment and putting on this kick ass contest. Jennifer
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Wow, Jenn! Uhhh.....steamy! And with a very difficult form! Great job, worth all the work!
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Thanks, It took alot out of me. Lots of time for word searching in the dictionary. But I think well worth it. Just stumbled across the photo and kabaam. Thats how its done.lol
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i can't imagine writing this difficult form.. i thought poem was excellent..... my thought how did you do this ... well done! thanks for sharing
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It took two days, and finally complete. Thanks for reading and for the compliments. they are greatly appreciated. Jennifer
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