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][ A Different Scene ][

Not my scene,
Not sure its right.
I sit in hear,
While they all fight.

Don't fit in,
And never will.
I cant fix this,
I need a fucking pill.

I wanna do shit,
That I know I shouldn't.
I wanna do shit,
But I promised I wouldnt.

I gave up that,
I wont do it anymore.
I'd rather sit alone,
Drunk against this wall.

He says that its his world,
But it's nothing to me.
I have to except it,
These things I see.



Author notes

well i think i needa explain this one... i was out last night, everyone was drinking, smoking, and doing drugs and it's totally not my scene(the smoking and drugs). so anyways i needed to right coz i'd had a few to drink and i had to let some things out.
then a si started right, and stuff was getting to me, i really wanted to start cutting again....

well anways tell me what u think of the poem.

peace out
xoxox

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  • Hovels 2
    July 5, 2008

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    This reminds me of me a little. Every time, I go to a social gathering, I always feel like I don't belong there. Even if there isn't any drugs of that sort. It's a good clean gathering. I sitll feel like an outsider. I guess, I'm a stay at home type of person.


  • wandering roots
    July 5, 2008
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    lmfao i forgot it again

  • wandering roots
    July 5, 2008

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    i keep forgetting these (told you i dont really comment poems or read them much less) but idkkkk!! i wanna read for some reason

  • wandering roots
    July 5, 2008
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    you have talent!! you have such a way with words that.. idk hit me, heh.. well this is the first poem i read that had form from you last one was the dont analyze me but this made me speechless.. took em a while to start typing this lol, love your poems!


  • named.disaster--x
    April 25, 2008

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    Excellant

    We all have times in our lives that we do things we are not pround of .... I think this is anexcellent poem you should keep writing because you are so good!I am personally glad that the smoking and drugs were not your scene, and I think the pressures od today can be so over-whelming. You did do a gread jod with the swearing, I think they inhanced your poem to show exactly what you felt Great work .I give you three roses for your work

    The best of luck to you,

    Page


  • XxTWLOHAxx
    April 2, 2008

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    wow i love it..... thats exactly how i feel sometimes...
    not the drugs thing i dont do that lol i ment your authors notes... the cutting thing
    well keep up the good writghing!!
    your amazing at it

  • Hallic
    March 22, 2008

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    First of all great poem I can very much relate to it, very deep and truthful.

    On the subject of where you are in life atm we all end up doing things we dont enjoy/said we'd never do, I know like you I said I'd never smoke or do drugs and yet less than a year of uni and I've openly experimented with drugs and am a smoker. One thing you have to do tho is be happy with who you are or its gonna get worse and your gonna move on to harder drugs and end up hurting yourself and those around you.

    hope things sort themselves out and your ok
    xxx

  • know one
    March 21, 2008
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    great flow
    good on you for staying strong
    keep writting cause it was really good!


    • hopelessly-broken
      March 22, 2008

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      thank you very much! glad u liked it.... its the first poem i'v written and posted in quite along time. so it means alot that u took the time out to read and comment it

      peace out
      xoxox

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