Father in Heaven we come to greet,
our family and friends,
make our circle complete.
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And if this man is not to be true,
let me forever drink bubbles of brew.
Author notes
The poem doesn't match the gracefulness of the border but I just couldn't help it besides I needed a little laugh
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Your poem gave me a laugh too, I think it should be written into all vows, especially the last two lines lol
The border is very graceful and floating, the bubbles add a nice touch with the bouquette, and the colours of the backdrop blend in so beautifully, not overpowering at all, the text needs to be adjusted though, to fit on the background, other than that this is a beautiful entry, thank you
~Lilac
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This is indeed graceful and I love the way the colors meld and change. This really is a work of art and a lovely ensemble.
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a very good take on the prompt.. nicely written and loved the last line and ya your background is beautiful and goes well with the lines.. thanx for sharing..
God bless you.. -
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Ty hun! Just added the roses in the center this a new style for me for sure!
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